Just before he passed out completely a huge hand descended in front of him, grabbing the girl’s limp body by the arm and lifting her out of view. But something was left behind, something small but distinctly ornate that he couldn't label sitting there where her body had been, and in that last moment of lucidity Tom felt overwhelmingly that it must be the most beautiful thing he had ever seen. His thoughts trailed off into darkness.
@BrandonHill Those 9 toots are all I've written so far
@fry Keep it up. :) The trick of writing is to write!
@BrandonHill Ha thanks - I'll keep trying! I have 3 or 4 ideas that have gotten about that far but I've never written a full story. I usually just write songs/poetry but things like this started happening recently.
@fry Was that from a book you wrote?